Weave Me a Story
Weave Me a Story …
Weave me a story
of suspense and intrigue.
I’d write one myself,
but I’m not in your league.
I adore a good mystery
that taxes your mind,
full of hidden clues
that aren’t easy to find.
You’re a famous crime writer,
it runs through your blood.
But looking for evidence
is like sifting through mud.
There will be twists and turns,
red herrings to chase.
A case solved too soon
would be a disgrace.
A real surprise ending
I know you’ll achieve.
You’ll reveal the murderer,
or catch the jewel thieves.
You’ll keep readers guessing,
they’ll come to dead ends.
Was it the butler,
or the hero’s best friend?
A dark random stranger,
or the girl with red hair?
Perhaps it’s the young man
who works at the fair?
Will they escape,
or will justice win?
The reader won’t know
‘til they get to the end.
If you keep them on edge,
at each critical stage,
they won’t put the book down
‘til the very last page.
If the readers enjoy it
a sequel they’ll request,
and then you will know
that your story’s the best.
© John Hansen 2023: All rights reserved
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That would be a powerful crime mystery for sure. Your poem is an inspiration for someone to pick up and weave a story for you. Well done, John.
I love how the reader is begging the writer for a mystery to solve. Great work! Jamie
Thank you, Jamie. Much appreciated as always.
Well isn’t that just the truth. A good story that keeps me guessing is just a good time. It is nice to get lost in crime mystery or thriller. If “weaved” properly its almost as if time just flies by while I’m reading. Nice one John.
Thank you for reading, Paul. I always love a good mystery.