Alternating Sensibilities (The Long Way Around)
Alternating Sensibilities …
From cacophonous caverns of echoing platitudes
extolling right vs wrong exuding from uneducated mouths
to impassioned flowing whispering whispers of caressing breeze
all within being paid none or little attention
until that viably exonerated day
Slaps beyond slaps where belts erroneously hit
bringing to meandering mind stories so horrific
melodiously melding dreams into nightmares
within winter’s darkest longest caressing nights
predicating only that which was known at the start
Insensitive sensitivity bounded beyond fullest froth
as warming touch by molded mind became
where that which touched in deepest sincerity
absolutely abolished all other necessary niceties
in forms of contacting others of like frame
Inherent sensibilities escaped upon enlarged wooden ledger
when emotional escape proved impossibly provided
mind being involved heart controlled through necessity
yet impossibility erased that longing for warmth
as from yesteryear mental fixations occupied
Alternating sensibilities forged fascinating escape
inside despairing depths recurring inside depression
caving throughout evaporating holes
which craved just that inexplicable commodity
known as the soul (the long way around)
As frozen feelings dependently deepened
a stout arousing precariously pushed along that ridge
where mind met matter, heart met water, both frozen
carousing within what would turn out to be salvation
in matted matter fortuitously fornicated
Continual control of what lay beyond outer sensibilities
erroneously erased any pursuant possibility toward love/life
while fashioned flavors gained fastidious footholds
within what equally espoused soul existed/resisted
as love/life caressed what spirit there was
Along what created craving path unworn by the spirit mind
arrived impassioned passion brought to bear
installing methodically musical resilience forever
writhing emotionally within one released written word
as spiritual and physical, remaining, retained their name
Alongside this rhetorically rhetoric, is planted many idiosyncrasies
of which knowledge should have been brought to light;
this having not been demonstrated inspired one incredibly lengthy journey
into the deepest darkest hole imaginable
finally reaping alternating sensibilities the long way around
P.S. Copyright 2018 Donald Loudon
P.P.S.S. If anyone would like the English version of this, I will be glad to translate!!
So, here I am. Relate to me, please!
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That is the long way around, for sure. 🙂 Well done, Donald.
Thank you very much, Phyllis.
This appeared to be an exercise in the use of adjectives 🙂 Interesting read, Donald.
Appearances can be so deceiving. Underneath there is so much more of a meaning.
Thank you for your visit, and kind comment, John.