Voodoo Dolls
Voodoo Dolls…puppets and all…
It’s understood the cloths of fate
Were cut, addressed and sought to sate.
No one believed this voodoo doll
would achieve the vilest rue of all
To sway the strife that seldom waits
or pray it will come and abate
They poked at “Jane” and made a gall,
But magic works in inklings, small
Jane called her home a cellar ledge
A room where sunlight never edged
Her body wasn’t sleek or tall
Jane never spoke a peep at all
Though hurt and vengeance was her sketch
At first glance she’s not stitched to etch
Her advent was a protocol
To cause torment like vitriol
Those pins and pokes that she endured
Were plasma red like unclean swords
The torment was like being mauled
Like blade marks from a ninja’s brawl
But sicker is the gliding hand
The killer guiding all her plans
The puppeteer who crafts the act
The financier who’s past is cracked.
With ire burning in the glands
As spires block, wits’ rudiments
The closet skulls remain intact
As prophets cull and then distract
Subconsciously his mind was hacked
And blind unto this evil pact
With wiccan dolls set and able,
His given call begets betrayal—
The pall this suffering attracts
His doll a means as sin enacts
It comes alive, just like a fable
And labels prey as lifelike fatal
When bloodthirst tops the pinnacle
With headfirst stops on clinical
The hatred notes of miscued facts
Of sacred voodoo artifacts
The painting of was critical
In making life so miserable,
‘twas difficult for him to act
As he stuck the pins into her back
He twisted hard with mystic shards
scripting victims to visit God
Not knowing if this “Jane” was hurt
Not slowing down if pain converts
What if this magic granted scars?
Is death not tragic enough to disregard?
Do victims need their just desserts?
Is Hell a whim with which to flirt?
I’ll bet he thinks he’s real slick
And not some raving lunatic
He doesn’t know the pain amassed
He only sets “Jane” out on tasks
What license has he to mark his pick
because his words are dark and quick?
He knows the spell he needs to cast,
He conjures Hell with words real fast
And sprung to life this killing doll
A phantom held with chilling thrall
A liquidator of the plight
In homicide she paints the night
The wailing few that make a squall
The ailing kin in sad withdrawal
The few whose light will never light
And rooms are never quite as bright
“Jane” disappeared without a trace
her pins here in a pencil case
the garments put back on their shelves
And the shaman’s book sealed with its spells
He turns the TV on these days
To affirm the seed has been effaced
Just one more mark upon his belt
Just one more spark so finely quelled…
In life, are we not voodoo dolls
With puppeteers who make our calls
Just blindly led by nothing right
To be some serving acolyte
Do strings pulled hard make us stonewalled
where flings of wool will blind eyeballs
They starve us of an appetite
observe us like some parasite
We jump in strong inflicting smite,
Brainwashed by those who grip real tight,
who dangle us upon the earth
Not knowing what the mantle’s worth
Devoid of any human rights
The grey matter of black and white
Cursed to the light when someone thirsts,
When someone needs to be dispersed
Are we so easily coerced?
Like puppets on a string still cursed
Are we to sight this oversight?
Or back to the cellar ledge each night
Are dolls like Jane still being nursed?
If all her wrongs are not reversed
Do footpaths filled with angry plight
Incur a wrath of dangerous might.
Are we not up to date with this
That somewhere down in each abyss
We find Geppetto pulling strings,
Pinocchio still following
And down the road we’ll reminisce
How humans couldn’t coexist
with Geppetto there still pulling strings
Pinocchio still worshipping
If we are ever going to change
Things will need to be rearranged
We need the blade of Atropos shears
To change the fate that has appeared
To disengage the killing rage
To temper anger that’s been engaged
To think our Janes now as endeared
And cut the strings off from her ears.
…Can we let go of all the anger inside?…
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I love this, Paul. The phrasing and rhyme is great. And the message is one to really think about. Well done, my friend.
Thank you so much Phyllis. Glad you enjoyed this.
Great phrasing and tempo Paul. An interesting take and I guess what people believe can become true just as a result of that. The group mind is a powerful thing. A thought-provoking work very much enjoyed my friend. Cheers!
It sure is Tony. Thank you so much for stopping by and the kind words as well.
Love the message in this piece Paul – well done my friend.
Thank you so much Kurt, glad you stopped by.
A wonderful message in this immaculately rhymed and paced poem. Love the theme and everything about it. Well done Paul.
Thank you so much John, glad you enjoyed it.