As Day Begins

As Day Begins …

Inside the morning sun

On wind swept morning

sun and mountains crest together

as flailing trees flow inside one another

inclining snow decides to melt or stay firm

and my eyes seek refuge from it all


Pounding surf betrays its sand

caressing with newly formed waves

as daylight replaces night’s skills

patterning footprints in solid wake

become lost in sweetly forming dew


Flapping waving of curtain sash

slaps my mind awake to outside stress

taking me from deeply involved dreams

inside those barely yet to be made

as feet top one icing inviting liquid floor


Outside of life my mind beckons

unresponsive powers of magic to hail

deciding where lies the real magic

whether in that black and white imagery

or colored manic state of day


As my mind and brain collide in passion

oblivious to that moment of reality

sun shards pierce where curtains stand

while breezes play their ritual games

both caressing as day begins


Tapping noises entrance

from spurting radiator’s whine

and other unknown origin

throughout now awake domicile

believing and receiving the light of day


As all come together as one

amassed from just passed night’s calling

reality strikes with jagged smoothness

reclining, yet inclining, in it’s easy chair

allowing for black and white to become color


once again






Donald Loudon

Donald Loudon

I have been writing since 1967, basically as an emotional release, but in the last few years I have become interested in creation of forms as well as being socially accepted by my peers. So, here I am. Relate to me, please!

10 thoughts on “As Day Begins

    • April 23, 2018 at 11:25 AM

      Thank you very much for your kindness, my friend!

    • April 23, 2018 at 11:26 AM

      You honor me with your time and kindness here, my friend!

    • April 24, 2018 at 4:42 AM

      I am grateful you liked this, Tony!

  • April 25, 2018 at 12:40 PM

    Nice work my friend. Great imagery, paints a great picture. Well done

    • April 25, 2018 at 4:10 PM

      Thank you, Paul for your visit and most kind words. Thank you, young man!

    • April 25, 2018 at 4:13 PM

      Kurt, you please me very much with your visit and kind words. Thank you, my friend!


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