At a Loss
Someone’s child …
At a loss for a few days now, trying to wrap my head around how this same scene keeps playing like a bad rerun.
At a Loss
With virtual thoughts and prayers not holding weight
and cause, the subject of debate
The human guild proceeds to reminisce
As doubt and anger still persist
It’s hard to endeavor to fathom why…
Why someone’s child had to die.
Why did we fail to stop this heinous violence,
Or protect our kids as worried parents?
The quick riposte is shadowed in withdrawal
With ghosts now haunting the marble halls
As savagery has detained our senses
with these monsters acting so pretentious—
We sit here now with nothing new to say
No words to vivify our saddened days.
It’s hard to reconcile with swollen anger,
To bear the rage or welcome rancor—
To scrutinize or censure evil’s face
as evil prides in wearing such vile disgrace,
Nonetheless, the struggle is overwhelming
and negligence itself, is clearly swelling
With discourse we try apologetics
crossing the sad shores of homiletics
In proposition with theorized planning
And in ostracized weapon banning—
Even notions of arming our lectors
Commending them the mark of protector
But with civil freedoms for the mentally ill,
We brainwash the weak to blame guns still.
How long can we galvanize the sick enabled,
Indoctrinating the blind with simple labels,
Blaming the gun, not the boy clenching the trigger
I think the issue has grown so much bigger.
Why is it implausible to speak of neglect,
the timetable that was left to wholly reflect.
The last time when parent and child would connect
Was it time enough for them to interject?
How quickly we write off the system as flawed,
with the conclusions made so foolishly drawn.
The law as read is not a pliable precept,
We can’t leave the maintenance plans themselves unkempt.
As information continues to evolve
How the bullets of blame were quickly devolved
And the system riddled with phony courage
is in desperate need of being refurbished.
How 4 minutes could mean your child’s life,
4 minutes to end such raucous strife
Cowards will hide in the guise of heroic raiment
and bear more arms for extra payment
We chastise the gun while removing blame,
Though the FBI knew the gunman by name
And though his health records say he is well,
The 17 dead have a different story to tell.
How epic the failure at every level
though the brave, they faced off against likely peril.
We honor them in homiletic sorrow
dreading the nasty truths that bring tomorrow
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This is so heart-breaking, Paul. You express the devastating loss and pain so well. I feel the anger as to why and the debating about guns – politicians blaming the gun is idiotic. The gun did not go off by itself. The boy who pulled the trigger was known to be a danger to society and nothing was done. You have a great piece here, one that represents the thoughts, feelings and anger of many, including myself. I am very impressed and quite proud of you for speaking out, dear friend.
Thank you so much Phyllis. It’s so hard to see this type of thing on an almost weekly basis this year. It is hard to write about too. I felt I had to though. Thank you for your appreciation of this writing.
So sad this event, but worse are the amount of them; crazy people killing indiscriminately, destroying lives. I don’t believe in easy access to guns, never have. We in Australia had a similar gunmen kill many people, the gun laws were immediately changed and the now the amount of people killed by guns is minimal. I think these statistics speak for themselves. Nicely written and emoted Paul. Cheers!
The weird part is that gun laws differ from state to state, even county to county. Can’t blame the gun only the ease of ability to get it. Craziness. Thank you so much for reading.
Such a sad direction our “society” is taking, with the sensationalizing in their own debased way loving the mass murders. So very many innocents being carried along inside one person’s horrific path. So very often. We are all punish ed. Great writing on such a high level, for such a low deed.
Thank you so much Donald. This is getting out of control, it’s disgusting. How they screwed this one up is sad. So many complaints to authorities about this sick individual and they did nothing. The cop there did nothing. So bad. Thank you for reading and your comments my friend.
Awesome piece my friend and heart wrenching as well, but in its way oh so beautiful. – It is my belief that the American society as a whole has let us all down – I remember back when I was young that I had a gun rack in my pickup that held two fully loaded rifles as did at least half of the pickups in the parking lot of our school. We never shot up a school or even thought about it. The guns never changed – it was the way we raise our kids and society that has changed.
Thanks Kurt. You are right though. Now everyone has a psychological thing and is on meds. I was telling a friend earlier this past week that I remembered people with gun racks at school as well. It a scary society we live in. Thank you so much my friend for your comments