Contemplating Life on a Frozen Pond
My thoughts seem to wander
Caught between the ice and frigid water
Of my looking-glass pond
Directionless, but not desperate
Alone in the woods, I had no one to confer with
So I spoke to the water spirits
Warmed by my own contemplation
As they listened while I shared without worry
Spilling the contents of my soul
Life sometimes at an impasse
Daily events keep the hours passing
But ultimately only measuring time
Some call it an invisible wall
A glass ceiling or perhaps one of ice
Opaque yet also transparent
Out of reach, or out of sight
It’s all about perspective and your objective
Limitless is the only limitation
Taking that first step
Perhaps situationally not as tenuous
As a walk on the frozen pond
Nevertheless it’s one necessary
For without step one, step two doesn’t happen
Standing still only makes you cold
Convincing oneself
Unlocking that which stands in the way
Preventing clear communication
For speaking with spirits
Requires a superior kind of listening
And a mind worthy of opening
After all we’re just seeking space
And the air trapped between the ice and water
Gives us room to breathe
More Winter-themed Poetry from R.J. Schwartz
Winter Wonderland – Flakes Falling Everywhere
Deconstructing a Snowstorm
Symphony of Cracking – The Music of Winter
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Creative and nicely penned Ralph, enjoyed the message and flow of the piece. Great work my friend.
Great analogy of life as on a frozen pond, a mirror to see the self and taking steps in the right direction. Very creative piece, Ralph. I enjoyed it very much.
Very creative and with vivid imaginary Ralph- I am one of the few that loves winter and all the lovely landscaping that comes along with it. I had a sudden chill reading this ..lol..