Trembling Alterations
Alterations of mind and body…
Explicit, fleshy raw and elicit,
conspiracy driven,
given harmoniously to the brevity
of occasion, sensation to heights unmatched,
writhing hips and lips
dispatched to delve deeply
into the wet warm squirming orifice
of reality, totality an ignorant assumption,
momentary bliss a function of the pursuit,
yet what lies beyond that slippery mist
of battered kissed persistence?
Scraping the nerves of the ecstatic,
caressing the flesh a mission,
where swollen appendages flail
in frantic search of warm embrace,
a race to find that place
where teetering explosions
meld with silken flesh,
soaked in rampant sex,
two bodies groaning in tongues,
goosebumps like nipples a many,
reaching for the sustenance of sucking.
Oh take me now and take me quick,
before the wick does ignite the surge,
and purged I will be,
so urged to take you to my flight of mind,
drag your kicking and screaming mind
to church to pray for solace,
render bodies anonymous
in their rhythmic, frantic throws,
what life does bestow in propagation,
to take a mind to planets far,
to trembling alterations.
Tony DeLorger © 2017
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My goodness! So passionately expressed, Tony. It sure wakes up the mind. Well done.
I would have to call this “a foreplay on words” to be precise. It certainly does cover every aspect of the act that I can think of and more. Nicely done!
Thanks Wayne, glad you enjoyed it. Cheers~
Glad you enjoyed it, I do love playing with words and evoking feelings. Cheers!
Amazingly well written and erotic, Tony. What more can be said?
Much appreciated John, glad you enjoyed it my friend.
From the iconic photo through your erotic verse, what more is to be penned my friend. Erotica at its finest, most stimulating, sensual, delicious, saturating, heat, pleasure and finality. For those who smoke in the aftermath, this was smokin red HOT. This was meant for all those consumed by it’s depth of desires, a cold shower is in order. Well done Tony, I hope you have cold water in your cave;-))) lol
Cold water I have my friend. Glad you enjoyed the foray, its actually quite a challenge to engage sensually and not deter with crass words. Both sex scenes and rape scenes in novels have always given me trouble and so I do practice as I believe as writers we should be able to write about anything, convincingly. Cheers Vincent.