Impending Rage, a Pointless Stage

Impending Rage, a Pointless Stage
Impending Rage, a Pointless Stage

Impending rage, poised to unleash,
a penny dropped, a startled breach,
nerves on edge, limits reached,
and the vile acrid surge does leach.

Words are fired in reckless affronts,
received not well with gnashed teeth crunch,
tempers swell and egos dwell so high,
as fists do clench in white knuckled sigh.

Then in red cloud blur, those fists do stir,
and blood and bruises not deter
the rage of men, their brutal ride,
grunts and grinds and pounding slurs abide.

As eyes flashing blackened views,
one man thumping, one man moot,
bravery failing, body reeling,
bloodied nose bereft of feeling.

Until one like a redwood falls,
stiff and mindless, hits the floor,
out in blissful recommended sleep,
the other victory in ego’s keep.

Yet who has won in rages numb resolve,
what proof is there in violent sum,
a man’s measure not of first,
but surely character, what’s taken in risk.

In any case a pointless stage,
when two men find a part in rage,
uncontrolled and petty counts,
no-one wins in bloody, worthless bouts.

Tony DeLorger © 2017

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Tony DeLorger

Full time author, freelance writer, poet and blogger since 1999. Twenty one published works, past winner of 'Poet of the Year' on HubPages, 'Poem of the Year' on The Creative Exiles, writer for Allpoetry.com, Google+, tonydwtf.blogspot.com.au videos on YouTube and book sales on website thoughtsforabeautifulmind.com, Amazon and digitalprintaustralia.com.au/bookstore

4 thoughts on “Impending Rage, a Pointless Stage

  • September 25, 2017 at 10:51 AM
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    It’s kind of Neanderthal like but, a good boxing match is always a good time. Most of the time it is meant for a release from the normal woes of society. But yeah ultimately no one wins.

  • September 25, 2017 at 5:27 PM
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    Much appreciated Paul, fighting although in our DNA for survival, we are still holding on to instincts we should have evolved beyond. Cheers!

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