Echoes on the Moors – A Halloween Stroll
‘Tis the Witching Hour
Time for things no longer living
Even worse, it’s All Hallows’ Eve…
Too long past the time of passing
Whenst the sun still shone and all was quiet
Now is the time of happening
Sky as dark as the robe of Death himself
Fog already risen on the moors
Murkiness seeming to feed on the night
Drinking energy from the living
Alas, it cannot wait and ahead you charge
Angry leaves on twisted currents, scream past your feet
Sharpened oak twigs reach down from bent branches
You feel the whispered near-miss and quicken your pace
The pathway clear; at least for now, but it’s hard to see
A shrill and agonizing calling echoes from the deep woods
Your attention trying to be in two places at once
As you stumble and fall forward, over and over
Disorientation, the night fills every vision
Trees give no bearing, and you’re all alone
At the time of night whenst all thing noble were in hiding
Good surrenders itself for the hour, as it has been
Standing at last, you then turn in endless circles
Too quick to even notice the path to your left
And panic sets in; screams everywhere, maybe yours
Running, chest pounding kind of running,
Tripping but never falling, hard to breathe
Every steps seems to go deeper into the foggy moors
Trees blending, rocks hidden, and no help from the wind
And then it happens, a single miscalculation and WHAM
A violent collision with a magestic oak tree
Trunk wider than two men, and taller too
You notice the acorns as you begin to lose consciousness
Weak all over, shortness of breath, no strength
Eyes struggling to stay open, all energy on trying to focus
But it’s a losing battle, eyelids fluttering
Seeing the leaves above, their green muted in the dark
Thick branches; reaching out for endless eternities
And of course, the three witches who just happened upon you!
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Whoa ! Intense stroll, or tripping, into the foggy moors. Perfect setting for a Halloween story, Ralph. I love it, and the witches are looking rather delighted to find the traveler. Great work.
Hope your Mabon was wonderful.
Awesome job Ralph. Walking in the moors on an amazing stroll how many thoughts are being forced into the brain and then the witches….excellent.
Love the witches pic Ralph, perfect. Some wonderful imagery and phrasing in this piece about Halloween, and very much enjoyed. Well done my friend.
Ralph I have never walked in or on the moors until I read this piece – thanking you for giving me the first stroll. Awesome piece.
You’ll be wanting to avoid the moors on a dark and stormy night….