And the sea undressed her
The Sea Undressed Her …

If I never go near the sea again I pray that
I will not see her there
It is her presence that wills silently of all the feeling
within anyone’s heart
We had danced and laughed and tasted the wine
but one day at the sea was all it took
I knew in an instant she would not be mine
and yet why not and why not now ?
It wasn’t so much that she undressed as did
the sea undress her
I watched in envy at the gentle hands of the waves
lay softly upon her flesh
And in that one instant I knew my hands could never hold
a woman who loves the sea as this
In one small moment she laid her hand upon the water
and moved the tides in kind
Her heart is owned by the sea as is her flesh
caressed in kind
and I can never compete with this lonely place
where the tides own even her mind
The sea undressed her and the sun caressed
the tides even own her emotions
for who am I to steal her away from
the sea and all it’s motions
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Romantic, mystical verse and very well penned. Nice work, Ed.
Nice Ed, with a light kind of esoteric feel that is haunting. The sea has many faces and this piece worked so well. Well penned and enjoyed my friend.
PS. not a criticism, but the the two ‘kind’ rhymes I feel stood out. Perhaps look at changing the first to rhyme with ‘this’. I think it would remedy that little glitch. Just my opinion. Great work mate!
Liked this so much I read it twice…. awesome piece Ed..