Symphony of Cracking – The Music of Winter

Plummeting temperatures ushering in a stillness without comparison
Fluidity gives way to an opaque stiffness, often shimmering and beautiful
Water vapor crystallizes, bonding to every branch, building, and roadway
Movement slows to a crawl until complete penetration prevents it
Blades of grass, long since drained of their green, stand like frozen soldiers
Branchy trees, wearing coats of white, dazzle and amaze passing humans
The visual interpretation of winter is on display in every direction and dimension
And yet therein lies something which has no physical form nor figure
Beyond transparency, transcendent in nature, sensual and sensitive
An ethereal and silent summons which bonds to the ambience of everywhere
A auditory request bordering on the surreal, springs forth in response
Emerging from somewhere, or nowhere, or perhaps anywhere
Directed on the four winds and all passageways found in between
Slipping unnoticed through houses, villages, across hearths and fields
Washing past humankind as a light breeze or a burst of psychic energy
An immenseness in stature, the force holds the inclination of quiet inspiration
Just a simple message, no magical incantation, no formidable chant
Calling out to the frozen landscape, whispers perched upon the mountaintops
Seeking a conductor, a rare offer of employment, to lead the symphony of cracking
One skilled in managing the echograms of the outdoors, the intensity and the masking
It’s not the sight of nature that so enlightens one so chosen, but instead it’s sound
Ponds, lakes, puddles, and streams exchange liquid volumes for sheets of ice
Smaller bodies give themselves freely to a state of absolute frozenness
Their core nothing more than a chamber of trapped air, devoid of outside influence
Shapes and sizes each unique and one-of-a-kind, as are the tiny crevices beneath
As night overtakes the meager rays of the winter day, the temperatures again dive
The few beads of moisture fall into line and join their frozen brethren
For dawn awaits, the conductor has been signaled, and the audience collected
The final preparations of the upcoming musical event are completed
Without fanfare or announcement, the first rays of sunlight peek into the darkness
Splintering at first, threading their way through the cracks in the high peaks
Then spilling forth, as if a navigation lock was suddenly thrust fully wide
Bringing forth cascading light, blinding but gentle, and much needed warmth
Baton held high, the landscape focuses on the arrival of the conductor
And with a pleasing rapidness, the heat bursts forth, colliding with the ice
In the distance, the first guttural crack cries out, booming with vigor
Another joins and then another, forming a chorus of shearing snowpack
A deep rumbling of a remote avalanche provides a steady percussion section
Soprano and alto creaks and groans reverberate playfully exchanging pitches
A spherical divergence claims every airwave, filling the free space with sound
The wavelength of the transient echoes providing layers upon layers of richness
Higher and higher the sun rises into the morning sky, more light and more heat
Change happening everywhere simultaneously, now visible to humankind
And movement, hours ago impossible, steps from behind the stage curtain
Boldly asserting dominance across the landscape, as the thaw continues
The conductor, our Helios, our Sol, calls for Calando Ritardando
And slowly the cracking dissipates, leaving only scattered dripping in it’s place
The curtain closes on this sunrise performance, the cold completely yielding
Until another frozen eve, with a captive audience, and sufficient ice
Then we shall be treated to another consideration of sound contemplation

Additional Reading from the Author of Symphony of Cracking
R.J. Schwartz is an American Poet and Author.
His complete works on The Creative Exiles Website can be found here
The Gypsy Thread is a huge collection of his original work
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I can almost feel the cold and hear those sounds, because of your vivid phrasing and creative word play. Very well done, Ralph.
Some wonderful phrasing and imagery of the symphonic sounds of winters hold. Beautifully penned and described so eloquently Ralph, felt a chill while ready it. And that no easy task here in the middle of a hot summer. Cheers!
Tony – I’m like your air conditioner – but I cool your insides first
So vivid and captivating Ralph..Winter does have its own mystic beauty , I guess..I loved how you described the blades of grass as frozen soldiers and also the musical sounds of winter..Thank you so much for sharing!
Your expressive poem has great imagery as I look out upon a harsh winter landscape. Can hear the crunch of ice as our freezing temps turn water to ice. Your winter poem positively sings.
Wow! Ralph, this was epic. Amazing descriptions of winter, and you left nothing out. Great penmanship.
Living in the mountains of Colorado and doing what I do best in photography, I spend countless hours in the ice and snow. You captures the sound and the feelings of those wintery days… simply beautiful
I guess we’re almost neighbors Kurt – I live in the mountains in Idaho – I’m trying to get my daughter to do more nature photography here locally so I can use those shots to connect to my writing. Thanks for the positive comment!
You are so right, especially in wonter months, its the sounds or lack thereof, that encapsulate nature. The cracking as you’ve so elegantly rendered in this magnificent offering of winter is the crescendo. Great work Ralph~Paul