Love’s Musing
Love’s Musing
This diamond, a small scintillating tick,
A flawless passing to adulthood quick
A sharply shimmered sun, in treble,
When our lips unearthed each other and clung,
When words escape like air from the lungs,
In silent language, in Tipani petals,
The dawn horizon stretches through her, bright,
Smitten with the clarity of starry nights,
Forever embraced in a moment’s kiss
Boundless through her eyes like flawless stars
In a world of ephemeral memoirs
You are that fire that burns eternal bliss
And people come to see your passion’s hue
The way it ignites you, the way it takes you.
The chemistry of touch, my soul, your heart,
No grander purge, in the flames of cupid’s beckon
Would again burn London down in seconds
Then in the minute hours of slumber’s start
When the entire world puts their hearts to sleep
The lyrics our silent mouths would steep
With but our eyes and through those windows, roam,
Like kindred souls who knew how to tango
We stared for hours, if minutes then let go
In perpetual bliss and right at home
With that you smiled, and I was wholly conquered,
My heart like putty in you tender offer
to me, you were a fight worth losing
So I sat there near you, as my heart melts
I couldn’t imagine sitting anywhere else,
riveted with the idea of love’s musing.
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A well-written and expressed poem of love, Paul. A nice read.
Thank you so much John, your comments are much appreciated. I’m glad you enjoyed this.~Paul
A beautiful rendering of love conquering the heart and soul. Great work, Paul.
Tis the season for love. Thank you for your kind words Phyllis. Glad you enjoyed this.~Paul
Most lovely and romantic poetry. Love the rhythm here.
Thank you so much Rasma. I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. Much appreciation for your kind words~Paul
Poetry and love – you do it well my friend
Much thanks for your kind words Kurt. Glad you enjoyed it.~Paul
Beautifully written Paul, of the subtle nuances of love..What but love can so conquer our heart and soul..Enjoyed reading your captivating words and thank you so much for sharing..
Thank you so much my dear friend, for your ever so kind remarks. Love conquers all. With Valentines day right around the corner, i figured i would start writing about the topic. Thank you for reading this dear Anjana ~Paul
Beautiful, my talented friend,….just beautiful!
Thank you so much Donald. Your short and sweet comment speaks volumes my friend.~Paul
I followed You, flowed with Your words… wondring where they will take me, but now I know all what I was feeling is the muse soaring over my head with its haunting mysterious touch, unique one dear Paul, prefect atmosphere for the title, for the creation and the real meaning of muse.
Well LS im glad you took the journey with me through the enthral of discovering love. Im so glad you continue to visit me here as your words are so cherished. ~Paul