Waiting on Winter

The chilly morning air and a harsh reminder
It brandishes many knives, sharp and penetrating
Slashing and stabbing at my heavy coat
Hungrily trying to feed on each exhaled breath
The feeling of warmth nothing but energy
Bitter winds riding an express train
From a hidden station high in the mountains
Travelling at breakneck speed to join the fray
Searching for that opening, searching for skin
Releasing an epic assault, again and again
Tendrils of icy sky drop down from above
My body ground zero for a pre-winter war
A few strands of hair move endlessly
Dances aplenty under the howling music
The distraction another cause for caution
Strengthen the defenses, halt the advance
Zippers zippered, buttons buttoned
Velcro, well…velcroed and done very tightly
Hat pulled down and socks pulled up
Gloves and scarves no longer optional
Yet still the wind makes run after run
Attacking without provocation or concern
Alone I move through the darkness
Watching the horizon for hints of the sun
Admiring the amazing crystalline patterns
The frost that arrived with the night
My windshield a canvas, renewed each day
Images of snowflakes etched in cold
Powdery white patterns of perfection
Covering my lawn and the tree branches
Taunting me evermore with the reminder
That soon winter, and all its power, will be here
Dryness in the air and the smell of cold
White flakes, beautiful at first, wafting down
Relentlessly they’ll fall, snuffing the imagery
Descriptions change as the flakes keep falling
What was green, or grey, or brown, or black
Everything gives way to the blanket of white
Each snowflake unique in every way
Snowfalls coming soon, and coming to stay
Reminded by the winds as Fall fades away
The mental snapshot of everything around
Sticks inside my head as I watch and prepare
For the endless wave of white hitting the ground
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Ralph, I love your command of descriptive phrases. This verse is a joy to read, I can vividly imagine and feel the stark cold. Marvelous work!
Wonderfully graphic imagery of winter.
Beautiful descriptions Ralph, with really wonderful phrasing and word usage. One can feel that bleak chill through your every word. So Nicely rendered my friend.
Ralph, this starts out with winter as the enemy attacking relentlessly, and finishes off with its beauty being realised and welcome. Very well written and a joy to read.