El Paso City
El Paso City …

The day was hot
and the sun burned bright,
down on him and his horse,
the misty desert haze,
bringing tears to his eyes.
He rode on longing to reach the Rio Grande,
his horse, head nodding,
looked so tired.
He had ridden from ranch to ranch,
but found no work.
His friend had told him,
of the beauties in El Paso
and he hoped that his heart –
might find a place to settle down.
Any work for him was fine,
but his heart was lonely
and so he rode into El Paso.
Found a place to lay his weary body
and it done him good to hear,
the thankful whinny of his horse,
now rested down below,
as he closed his eyes to rest.
Refreshed and rejuvenated,
he stood at the window,
wondering what this night might bring.
He chose a saloon,
that pleased his eye
and went to look around.
That was when he saw her,
a true beauty for sure.
Raven black hair
and flashing brown eyes,
she came to him –
with a radiant smile.
They got to know one another,
sharing some tequila.
She told him that she regretted ,
the life she led in El Paso
and he was willing to move on,
as long as she was by his side.
The sat and they drank
and her laughter sounded,
like tinkling silver bells in his ear.
The more he looked,
the more his heart longed for her
and this beauty Juanita,
seemed content to be with him.
Then the door of the saloon,
burst open with a loud bang.
There stood a man,
with a mean look in his eye.
He walked on over
and he realized that his dream,
had ended,
perhaps even his life.
He searched Juanita’s eyes,
to see a glimmer there.
He did see fright
and something he couldn’t identify.
Then the man with the Mexican hat,
told him that Juanita was his woman.
As much as he felt that something wasn’t right,
he didn’t want to fight
and so he got up,
faced the man
and apologized for taking up Juanita’s time.
It surprised him that he could pass by
but then the man followed him outside.
He told him to leave town
and that he didn’t want to see him anymore.
Juanita had tears in her eyes,
with a shrug of his shoulders,
he turned and started walking away.
That was when he realized,
he had no wallet
and when he turned to confront them again,
he saw Juanita’s arms wrapped around the man,
laughing into his face
and he knew what a fool he’d been.
So he just walked away
and in the morning as he rode out of town.
With plenty of money,
in the satchel upon his horse,
but he cursed the day,
when he had decided,
to come to El Paso City,
for it had opened many a sore wound
and he headed for the Rio Grande.
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A double twist! Very good, Rasma!
Thank you Will.
A wonderful story portrayed in this poem, Rasma. It brings back memories of a Marty Robbins’ song, “Streets of El Paso” ..and the line “I fell in love with a Mexican girl.”
You’re right John. That was the inspiration and it became a poem.
Very nice, Rasma. It reminds me of Marty Robbins and the kind of songs he sang.
I just commented that Marty Robbins and his song was the inspiration. Usually I hear a song that offers inspiration and then I just start writing and to see what develops.
I am with Phyllis it does remind me of Marty Robbins and just for the record I love Marty Robbins….
Thank you Kurt. Marty has left behind lots of songs that inspire.
A nicely told story about life, and things not always as they seem. Well penned and beautifully rendered Rasma. great work.
Thank you Tony.