Love Sonnets
Love Sonnets
Love Sonnets ~
As I look back at love over my life,
Ere my emotions were quiet and calm,
I see the days for my soul held no balm,
To soothe my weary mind and ease the strife.
Alone now, I am ready for the one
I can cherish with all my heart and soul.
Ahead on my path, he can make me whole.
I will walk with him, dreary days or sun.
Let me not fear what I have just begun.
I have opened my heart for one last time.
Wither it stays just friends or something more,
My love will only grow and will become
More precious each day to me, so sublime.
And surely be as no other before.
Love is knowing when to let go ~
From whence do they come, unbidden and shunned?
Dreams of seeking solace, and peace from fears.
Fears that leave me shaking, need to overcome,
This feeling of oneness, drowning in tears.
Love I sought, followed a path of sun light,
Knew the one I could walk with all my days,
Share my life with, to be there day and night.
Care for him deeply and know his many ways.
Give to him the true love he so longs for.
Let myself be loved and embrace the glow
Of a life together, not asking more
Than what he can give with his heart and soul.
Love him more each day, leave if I must, for
Now I see, love is knowing when to let go.
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© Copyright 2016 All Rights Reserved Phyllis Doyle Burns
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Lovely sentiments. I love the last verse. As the say if you let go of love if it was meant to be love will eventually return to you once more.
Thank you so much, Rasma. Glad you enjoyed the sonnets. Yes, I do remember that saying now – I had forgotten that, so thanks for the reminder. Take care.
Beautiful Phyllis, and so very true in its sentiment. I hope you find your love, and never have to let go. He would be so fortunate to share his love with such a kind soul. Enjoyed this.
Best,
Mel
Oh! Thank you for such a lovely comment, Mel. I so appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
Well written sonnets on an emotion that sometimes is hard to express. Great write and read Phyllis.
Hi Jamie. Thank you very much for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed the sonnets.
Love Sonnets from a truly longing heart that is open and ready to receive him. Your kindred spirit, who exists somewhere in time, leave your spirit open to him, he will find you. I wish you and him all the best when your souls finally unite as one. Beautiful words expressed from a vessel filled with LOVE.
Awww! Thank you, Vincent, for your very compassionate message.
Beautiful sonnets, Phyllis (I love sonnets) and I know these are written from a personal level. Well done.
Thank you so much, John. Sonnets are my favorite type of poetry – I have to really think when I write them. Hmmm – is it that obvious?
Very nicely done, Phyllis. I love the cadence and the flow. Thank you.
You are most welcome, William. So glad you like my sonnets. I love to write sonnets. It keeps my mind active because of the rhyming sequences. Lots of fun!
Beautifully penned Phyllis in heartwarming sentiments and feelings of love. Filled with emotion and an easy fluid verse very much enjoyed . Well done
Thank you so much, Tony. So glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
They are lovely sonnets that gave me positive feelings. And lord knows do we ever need those more than ever these days. The ancient Greeks would have called these sonnets “Beauties.”
Hello dear friend, Alastar. It is always such a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So glad the sonnets gave you positive feelings. Take care.
Phyllis
So beautiful and makes me wish to have those wonderful feelings again. I never dreamed to ever lose them but somehow life happens and love may not be lost but turned to simply caring but to always have that torch that burns through our veins and makes us walk on air….ah….your poem takes me there.
Thank you, Jackie. Love is a wonderful feeling. It makes a soul complete. So glad you like the sonnets.
So very beautiful….giving your all and yet, knowing when to let go – the wonder of real love shines through!
Thank you so much, Shalini. So glad you like it. I love to write sonnets – it strengthens my mind and creativity. Take care.