Free, Free, Free

Is anything free
Is Anything Actually Costless?

Does Free really mean without charge?  We see a multitude of offers everyday on-line promising us everything from no-cost software to skin treatments.  But, most people know everything comes with a price…complimentary, if you are willing to pay.

 

Free, free, free

Search the net and you will see

Custom offers just for me

 

Games for kids to help them read

Grow some plants, here’s a seed

It’s what you want, what you need

 

The mobile app with hidden ads

Browser full of open tabs

The latest toys for college grads

 

Free TV for thirty days

Try a game, see how it plays

Pass some time on rainy days

 

File your taxes, it’s for nothing too

Enjoy a sample of a coffee brew

Maybe some tickets to the zoo

 

Online music, heard by all

Yes, today is your windfall

Slip from behind that eight ball

 

It’s given away for a simple price

An e-mail address will suffice

Take the chance, roll the dice

 

Just be certain that what you got

Is equal to the spam onslaught

Seems to me like you’ve bought

 

A giveaway with tangled strings

Electronic safety has taken wing

You’ve given up, your everything

 

Stick to things that are truly free

Speech and what your eyes can see

Green grass and the shade of a tree

 

In their midst no strings can cling

Real happiness they will bring

You may even have the urge to sing

 

Decide you must, the choice is yours

Stay inside behind stuck doors

Or boldly take a step outdoors

 

 

R J Schwartz
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R J Schwartz

I write about everything and sometimes nothing at all. I'm fascinated by old things, rusty things, abandoned places, or anywhere that a secret might be unearthed. I'm passionate about history and many of my pieces are anchored in one concept of time or another. I've always been a writer, dating back to my youth, but the last decade has been a time of growth for me. I'm continually pushing the limitations of vocabulary, syntax, and descriptive phrasing.

6 thoughts on “Free, Free, Free

  • April 11, 2016 at 8:05 PM
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    RJ, it is good to meet you. You have a good flow and rhythm with this piece. We have been given a precious freedom. The freedom to live. And may we all enjoy every moment.

  • April 11, 2016 at 8:15 PM
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    Yes indeed the barkers and sales media are abundant with FREE words. They offer FREEDOM but are we really, really free. I feel FREE in my country, and kiss the ground I walk on for the simplest FREEDOMS that we take for granted and other countries would kill to have. FREEDOM comes with a huge price tag for many around the world. So I agree let’s be cautious with the FREE word and who is giving them, because everything I’ve found, comes with a price. Nicely rhymed RJ and the message very clear to me.

  • April 11, 2016 at 9:26 PM
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    RJ , I love this message , man , are we ever addicted to free things that are never free and you’re right , go outside and see what’s really free !

  • April 12, 2016 at 7:33 AM
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    Great poem, Ralph. So many things are advertised as free until you read the fine print. Many a time I have seen “Free entry to win a car, iPad etc” only to find out that you have to sign up to dozens of other offers, or find out that you have signed up to text messages on your phone @ $3.50 per message or something similar. If something is free it is often too good to be true. Love your rhyme.

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