Alternating Sensibilities (The Long Way Around)

Alternating Sensibilities …

Where to visit for longitude

From cacophonous caverns of echoing platitudes

extolling right vs wrong exuding from uneducated mouths

to impassioned flowing whispering whispers of caressing breeze

all within being paid none or little attention

until that viably exonerated day

 

Slaps beyond slaps where belts erroneously hit

bringing to meandering mind stories so horrific

melodiously melding dreams into nightmares

within winter’s darkest longest caressing nights

predicating only that which was known at the start

 

Insensitive sensitivity bounded beyond fullest froth

as warming touch by molded mind became

where that which touched in deepest sincerity

absolutely abolished all other necessary niceties

in forms of contacting others of like frame

 

Inherent sensibilities escaped upon enlarged wooden ledger

when emotional escape proved impossibly provided

mind being involved heart controlled through necessity

yet impossibility erased that longing for warmth

as from yesteryear mental fixations occupied

 

Alternating sensibilities forged fascinating escape

inside despairing depths recurring inside depression

caving throughout evaporating holes

which craved just that inexplicable commodity

known as the soul (the long way around)

 

As frozen feelings dependently deepened

a stout arousing precariously pushed along that ridge

where mind met matter, heart met water, both frozen

carousing within what would turn out to be salvation

in matted matter fortuitously fornicated

 

Continual control of what lay beyond outer sensibilities

erroneously erased any pursuant possibility toward love/life

while fashioned flavors gained fastidious  footholds

within what equally espoused soul  existed/resisted

as love/life caressed what spirit there was

 

Along what created craving path unworn by the spirit mind

arrived impassioned passion brought to bear

installing methodically musical resilience forever

writhing emotionally within one released written word

as spiritual and physical, remaining, retained their name

 

Alongside this rhetorically rhetoric, is planted many idiosyncrasies

of which knowledge should have been brought to light;

this having not been demonstrated inspired one incredibly lengthy journey

into the deepest darkest hole imaginable

finally reaping alternating sensibilities the long way around

P.S. Copyright 2018  Donald Loudon

P.P.S.S.  If anyone would like the English version of this, I will be glad to translate!!

Donald Loudon

Donald Loudon

Cashier at Walmart
I have been writing since 1967, basically as an emotional release, but in the last few years I have become interested in creation of forms as well as being socially accepted by my peers.

So, here I am. Relate to me, please!
Donald Loudon

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Donald Loudon

I have been writing since 1967, basically as an emotional release, but in the last few years I have become interested in creation of forms as well as being socially accepted by my peers. So, here I am. Relate to me, please!

4 thoughts on “Alternating Sensibilities (The Long Way Around)

    • May 16, 2018 at 3:55 AM
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      Thank you very much, Phyllis.

      Reply
  • May 15, 2018 at 7:37 PM
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    This appeared to be an exercise in the use of adjectives 🙂 Interesting read, Donald.

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    • May 16, 2018 at 3:57 AM
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      Appearances can be so deceiving. Underneath there is so much more of a meaning.
      Thank you for your visit, and kind comment, John.

      Reply

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