Beyond The Passion Where Loving Lives (There)
Beyond the Passion Where Loving Lives
As arms befriend some empty air
there arrives a portion somewhat there,
in exercise brought into play
there exists some inside to stay…
Passions caress themselves within each other
making out to be some eternal lover,
there before those feelings of bliss
remains breezes so wonderfully kissed
Whereupon there lay some ethereal place
belies somewhat of one patterned trace,
as where sweetened bodies share
belays some of un forbidden care
As love becomes within its spree
there lay all layers of entering free,
beyond sweet mountains of ethereal passion
existed so deeply within in ethereal fashion
As breezes flow throughout caressing seas
there lays beyond that eternal please,
beyond the passion where loving lives
all wrapped inside what loving gives (there)
© 2018 Donald Loudon
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Very nice poem for your first post on TCE. Well done, Donald.
Welcome Donald, and enjoyed your first post. Hope you enjoy our community. Cheers!
Nice to see you’ve joined us Donald – enjoyed your first work and looking forward to more
Thank you all very much. Your kind attention and comments on my first write mean a lot
to me. After I “get my feet wet,” I will be around to read you all.
Welcome to TCE dear friend Donald..a really lovely first poem on this site and hope you would enjoy it here..
Thank you beyond words, dear sweet lady. You have just made my day. I will be reading you again., soon. Donald!
Donald, would you like to submit this poem to our ‘February Love Poem Contest’? If so, I will add it to the list and publish the list in the forum and in the newsletter on 2/15 when we can start voting.
Please, do, Phyllis, and thank you very much for the help.
Donald!
Glad to see your writing spirit on these pages dear sir. Excellent opening piece. Looking forward too many more and welcome to TCE
I am so glad to be here, finally, and to be greeted by you my dear friend. I shall be around to read you, and post more in the coming days. Take care, Paul. Donald!
Hi Donald,
List of entries for the contest has been posted in the forum and in the 2/15 newsletter.
Please vote for your favorite poem. Last day to vote is 2/28. Winner will be announced in
the March 1 issue of our newsletter. Winner will be notified by private email with request
for address to send the ‘101 FAMOUS POEMS’ book to. Thank you.
Thank you very much, Phyllis, for your kind attention.
Donald!
Nice work, Donald. I really enjoyed this first piece by you.
Thank you, John, for your kindness. This was written very quickly, yet in my own style to never change a word, while writing steadily. Donald!