Beyond The Passion Where Loving Lives (There)

Beyond the Passion Where Loving Lives

As arms befriend some empty air

there arrives a portion somewhat there,

in exercise brought into play

there exists some inside to stay…

 

Passions caress themselves within each other

making out to be some eternal lover,

there before those feelings of bliss

remains breezes so wonderfully kissed

 

Whereupon there lay some ethereal place

belies somewhat of one patterned trace,

as where sweetened bodies share

belays some of un forbidden care

 

As love becomes within its spree

there lay all layers of entering free,

beyond sweet mountains of ethereal passion

existed so deeply within in ethereal fashion

 

As breezes flow throughout caressing seas

there lays beyond that eternal please,

beyond the passion where loving lives

all wrapped inside what loving gives  (there)

 

© 2018 Donald Loudon

 

 

 

 

 

 

Donald Loudon

Donald Loudon

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I have been writing since 1967, basically as an emotional release, but in the last few years I have become interested in creation of forms as well as being socially accepted by my peers.

So, here I am. Relate to me, please!
Donald Loudon
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Donald Loudon

I have been writing since 1967, basically as an emotional release, but in the last few years I have become interested in creation of forms as well as being socially accepted by my peers. So, here I am. Relate to me, please!

14 thoughts on “Beyond The Passion Where Loving Lives (There)

  • February 6, 2018 at 7:53 PM
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    Welcome Donald, and enjoyed your first post. Hope you enjoy our community. Cheers!

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  • February 6, 2018 at 8:15 PM
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    Nice to see you’ve joined us Donald – enjoyed your first work and looking forward to more

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  • February 7, 2018 at 4:12 AM
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    Thank you all very much. Your kind attention and comments on my first write mean a lot
    to me. After I “get my feet wet,” I will be around to read you all.

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  • February 7, 2018 at 11:14 AM
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    Welcome to TCE dear friend Donald..a really lovely first poem on this site and hope you would enjoy it here..

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    • February 7, 2018 at 4:37 PM
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      Thank you beyond words, dear sweet lady. You have just made my day. I will be reading you again., soon. Donald!

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  • February 7, 2018 at 5:33 PM
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    Donald, would you like to submit this poem to our ‘February Love Poem Contest’? If so, I will add it to the list and publish the list in the forum and in the newsletter on 2/15 when we can start voting.

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    • February 8, 2018 at 11:35 AM
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      Please, do, Phyllis, and thank you very much for the help.
      Donald!

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  • February 8, 2018 at 4:54 AM
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    Glad to see your writing spirit on these pages dear sir. Excellent opening piece. Looking forward too many more and welcome to TCE

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    • February 8, 2018 at 11:38 AM
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      I am so glad to be here, finally, and to be greeted by you my dear friend. I shall be around to read you, and post more in the coming days. Take care, Paul. Donald!

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  • February 16, 2018 at 5:48 PM
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    Hi Donald,

    List of entries for the contest has been posted in the forum and in the 2/15 newsletter.

    Please vote for your favorite poem. Last day to vote is 2/28. Winner will be announced in

    the March 1 issue of our newsletter. Winner will be notified by private email with request

    for address to send the ‘101 FAMOUS POEMS’ book to. Thank you.

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    • February 17, 2018 at 6:48 AM
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      Thank you very much, Phyllis, for your kind attention.

      Donald!

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    • February 17, 2018 at 6:49 AM
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      Thank you, John, for your kindness. This was written very quickly, yet in my own style to never change a word, while writing steadily. Donald!

      Reply

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