Writers On the Web Rasma Raisters
By Rasma Raisters
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
Into love we’re thrown
With no thought of our own
Like a child in the unknown
Running to get home
Lost hearts on the wind
There’s a liar out there
Looking to break your heart
Tears like pearls falling
Somewhere a better man is calling
For now in despair you’re falling
Gotta find your right man, yeah
You cannot love this man
You cannot love this man
You must let go of his hand
He’ll never understand
Everything now depends on you
You must seek your love so true
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
Into love we’re thrown
With no thought of our own
Like a child in the unknown
Running to get home
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
Lost hearts on the wind
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Marvelous version, Rasma. I love it. You did quite well on this. Thank you for joining the competition.
Really wanted to give this a try. I get inspired quite often by all kinds of music. Glad you enjoyed this Phyllis.
Glad you decided to enter the contest and give it your touch of love, or lost love. Good job.
Thank you John.
Ah the cheaters and liars cutting loose under the guise of lost hearts on the wind. I like this and the flow is good. A great contribution Rasma to the challenge. Bravo and well done.
Thank you Vincent. Music has always been an inspiration.
This is wonderful! I really like these words, and the subject, you have chosen for Writers on the Web. It’s brilliant. I can also relate to the message!
Thank you Tamara. Love and loss are quite inspirational.
Yes, so is having others reciprocate by giving feedback to their poems, as well.
Well done Rasma, so many versions, its and endless treat. great work!
Thank you Tony.
I like this take on Writers on the Web. Turning it into a lost love poem worked well.
Thank you Emese.
Rasma,
I came back to reread this because I love the uniqueness of your lyrics! You did a fantastic job on it, and I admire the fact that you changed the subject matter to “Lost Hearts” 🙂 It’s so creative!
Thank you so much Tamara. I enjoyed yours as well.
Very well done Rasma, and who can rule our hearts, protect them from break? Such a poignant take and expressive message. Enjoyed it!
Best,
Mel
Thank you Mel.