Writers on the Web by Paul Neglia
Writers on the Web by Paul Neglia
Essence of the Rhyme
Essence of the Rhyme
The muse on borrowed time
Emotions redefined
Like a day in spider sun
The weaving has begun
Essence of the Rhyme
There’s a poet on a spree
his brain is painting scenery
The place his passions play,
takes your mind astray
If you give his pen a try
Sometimes he’ll make you cry
Poet on a spree, yeah
Hey you gotta take a chance
Hey you gotta take a chance
Read his wonderland
Try to understand
His soul on you depends
If dreams will still be penned
Gotta take a chance, yeah…
Proud father of 3. Part time writer of poetry and short stories. I want to paint the world in but a few words.
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Excellent rendition, Paul. I love it. Very good choice of word usage. Well done, dear poet.
Thank you Phyllis. This was a fun challenge. I found myself writing multiple verses and thought this was one of the better ones
Essence of the Rhyme and a Poet on a spree, lovely connection. We as poets definitely do our best to use our time effectively when it comes to penning our thoughts. Sometimes though a blank white block out occurs and we are desperate for a rhyme. I enjoyed this verse very much Paul, you definitely caught the essence of the rhyme. Bravo.
Thank you Tony. I hate when writers block occurs. It is extremely frustrating. Thank you again
This is a beauty! I love the flow, and the lovely poetic words that make this poem so enchanting, and wondrous. It’s very smooth, and quite passionate.
Lovely!
Thank you so .uch Tamara. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
You did the song proud, Paul. Wonderful word use that all writers can relate to, and you kept to the rhythm all throught. Great job.
I quite enjoyed coming up with something for a Doors track. It was a fun challenge to try. Thank you so much John. Much appreciated
Excellent work Paul, yet a different poetic take, love it!
All of them have been fantastic renditions so far. Thank you my friend for your thoughts.
Word usage and rhythm spot on, good job.
“Like a day in spider sun…” very unique! Creative!
Paul! so new from You BUT oh!!! Perfect brilliance! perfectly flowing, just sweet and beautiful! I really like it and was kind of singing it too lol! Thank You for sharing such lovely little song with a deep meaning and message that we writes do understand.
Thank you so much my dear friend. I’m sorry I didn’t see your comments before.
Great way to play with words, and wonderful imagery! I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you so much Emese Im glad you enjoyed it
Nice rhythm and rhyme here. Well done.
Paul, this was superb. I admire the choice of “Essence of the Rhyme” you made it your own, you made it unique, and still stayed true and flowing with the prompt. Fun to work alongside you guys. Love it. Cheers!
Best,
Mel
Thank you very much Mel. And it has been a pleasure to enjoy your works as well.
Congratulations, Paul. This rendition of yours has been voted #1. Well done. I sent you an email regarding the prize.
Thank you again Phyllis
Paul,
Congratulations! Love “Spider Sun”… LOL LOL… YAY!!!
Hugs,
Tamara
Thanks again Tamara