Writers on the Web by Paul Neglia

Writers on the Web by Paul Neglia

Essence of the Rhyme

Essence of the Rhyme

The muse on borrowed time

Emotions redefined

Like a day in spider sun

The weaving has begun

Essence of the Rhyme

 

There’s a poet on a spree

his brain is painting scenery

The place his passions play,

takes your mind astray

If you give his pen a try

Sometimes he’ll make you cry

Poet on a spree, yeah

 

Hey you gotta take a chance

Hey you gotta take a chance

Read his wonderland

Try to understand

His soul on you depends

If dreams will still be penned

Gotta take a chance, yeah…

 

 

 

 

 

Paul Neglia

Proud father of 3. Part time writer of poetry and short stories. I want to paint the world in but a few words.
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Paul Neglia

Proud father of 3. Part time writer of poetry and short stories. I want to paint the world in but a few words.

23 thoughts on “Writers on the Web by Paul Neglia

    • July 19, 2017 at 9:24 AM
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      Thank you Phyllis. This was a fun challenge. I found myself writing multiple verses and thought this was one of the better ones

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  • July 18, 2017 at 1:22 PM
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    Essence of the Rhyme and a Poet on a spree, lovely connection. We as poets definitely do our best to use our time effectively when it comes to penning our thoughts. Sometimes though a blank white block out occurs and we are desperate for a rhyme. I enjoyed this verse very much Paul, you definitely caught the essence of the rhyme. Bravo.

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    • July 19, 2017 at 9:25 AM
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      Thank you Tony. I hate when writers block occurs. It is extremely frustrating. Thank you again

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  • July 18, 2017 at 2:51 PM
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    This is a beauty! I love the flow, and the lovely poetic words that make this poem so enchanting, and wondrous. It’s very smooth, and quite passionate.

    Lovely!

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    • July 19, 2017 at 9:25 AM
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      Thank you so .uch Tamara. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  • July 18, 2017 at 6:24 PM
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    You did the song proud, Paul. Wonderful word use that all writers can relate to, and you kept to the rhythm all throught. Great job.

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    • July 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM
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      I quite enjoyed coming up with something for a Doors track. It was a fun challenge to try. Thank you so much John. Much appreciated

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  • July 18, 2017 at 6:28 PM
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    Excellent work Paul, yet a different poetic take, love it!

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    • July 19, 2017 at 9:27 AM
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      All of them have been fantastic renditions so far. Thank you my friend for your thoughts.

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  • July 24, 2017 at 11:03 PM
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    Paul! so new from You BUT oh!!! Perfect brilliance! perfectly flowing, just sweet and beautiful! I really like it and was kind of singing it too lol! Thank You for sharing such lovely little song with a deep meaning and message that we writes do understand.

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    • August 11, 2017 at 6:28 AM
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      Thank you so much my dear friend. I’m sorry I didn’t see your comments before.

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  • August 8, 2017 at 11:01 AM
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    Great way to play with words, and wonderful imagery! I enjoyed reading it.

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    • August 11, 2017 at 6:28 AM
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      Thank you so much Emese Im glad you enjoyed it

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  • August 14, 2017 at 10:46 AM
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    Paul, this was superb. I admire the choice of “Essence of the Rhyme” you made it your own, you made it unique, and still stayed true and flowing with the prompt. Fun to work alongside you guys. Love it. Cheers!

    Best,
    Mel

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    • August 14, 2017 at 12:46 PM
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      Thank you very much Mel. And it has been a pleasure to enjoy your works as well.

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  • August 24, 2017 at 12:09 PM
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    Congratulations, Paul. This rendition of yours has been voted #1. Well done. I sent you an email regarding the prize.

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    • August 24, 2017 at 3:15 PM
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      Thank you again Phyllis

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    • August 24, 2017 at 3:15 PM
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      Thanks again Tamara

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