Awakened Heart
Awakened Heart
Here I sit at the feet of the Deity, the one who is centered in Peace;
A Zen mind… unperturbed; ignorant of left and right…
O’ Surabhi, incessant… incessant… are the sweet whispers;
The glory of the morning dawn, the whiteness of the dove,
The fresh scent of damped soil, the old tremulous leaves,
The ambience of transparent clouds, the soft luscious wind…
Lo! The golden glow holds the sky, giving birth to a new morning,
A morning where the delicate sunbeams caress the Indian land,
Where the glimmering pearls grow in the depths of my Heart,
Where the singularity of ‘I’ is replaced by the plurality –
The plurality of Oneness.
Rose alone is not a rose without its aroma.
Yes, the sweet whispers of the fragrant nature are not seen,
They are sensed when the Heart becomes awake.
~ Copyright © Surabhi Kaura 2016
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Hello Surabhi…such a lovely flowing poem in style, and message. A true pleasure to read. Thank you. 🙂
Best,
Mel
Hi Melissa! Greetings, Dear One. I am glad that you like it. You’re most welcome 🙂
Greetings, Surabhi. Welcome to TCE, it is good to have you here and read your first poem. A lovely poem it is, too, filled with peace, harmony, and love. Well done.
Thank you for the warm welcome, Ms. Burns. Greetings you as well! Such a nice place to connect with each other, aha! Thank you once again for appreciating my poem. Much Love.
Welcome Surabhi, an awakened heart indeed, in this delicate artfully rendered poem filled with beauty and peaceful intentions. Some lovely phrasing and imagery, very much enjoyed, Hope you enjoy the site, its a pleasure having you here. Take care.
Thank you so much, Tony. My heart is filled with joy after reading such an uplifting feedback. You all are like a family here. Much Gratitude… much.
Very nicely done, Surabhi. Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you, Sir. Appreciated. Good to meet you!
Ah, Surabhi My Dear, I am so glad that you conquered the difficulties you had getting into the site. It is wonderful to see you here and an absolute pleasure to read your beautiful poem which has already added to the quality of our site. I am glad other members have already given you a warm welcome. An excellent first poem. xx
Ah, Jodah, my Dearest! It was only possible because of you. Hats off (smile). Yes, yes, what a community here! I am loving it. Thank you, my Sweet. Hugs.
Very beautiful poem with such descriptive content one cannot help but love it. Having read it days ago I am just now with time to stop by and comment. Sorry to take so long. Welcome to TCE and hope to hear more from you soon.
Thank you, Dear Jackie. So sorry for the late reply. Thanks for the warm welcome. Much Love.
Hey Surabhi,
Its so good to see you here. And what a brilliant piece to start the proceedings here. I welcome you with all the aplomb and look forward to reading more of you.
Hey Tarun,
Good to see you! So sorry, bro. I have been quite busy lately. My studies seem to take most of my time. I will try to write more here. Until the next time.
You paint such a beautiful picture with your words!
Thank you, Shalini. I appreciate it. Welcome here 🙂
Wow! Just beautiful. What wonderful mind pictures you’ve created!
A lovely poem, beautifully expressed.