Rhythm of Your Strum
Rhythm of Your Strum
Tranquility hums
to the rhythm of your strum…
your voice
honey…
healing hearts, young and old.
Won’t you sing to me?
Unbutton the glow
dance your beats upon my soul…
take me gentle
take me slow…
take me on your open road
where stars rain…
Love your way
your tones that play…
pulling me in
to a garden sway.
Won’t you take me there…
just for a moment
for a day?
Tranquility hums
to the flow of your strum…
your voice
honey…
I’ve come undone.
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Tranquility reigns indeed, another exciting rhythm packed poetic verse. I could hear the strum, feel the romance brewing as you pulled me in, your reader to your finely crafted words. It’s wonderful when we become undone, even if for just a little while. Nicely penned Mel.
Yes, even if just…what a lovely comment, I am grateful. Thanks again!
Best,
Mel
Most evocative and smooth Mel, the music seeping from every word. A lovely light feeling work with emotive sentiments and afferent phrasing of succumbing to the guile of music and the player. Nice!
Thank you Tony, sorry I missed your lovely comment…appreciate it. 🙂
Best,
Mel
Mel, your poetry certainly has an element of a musical beat about it. This was well crafted and catchy. Good work.
Thank you John, too bad I could’nt carry a tune to save my life…still, somehow I feel a natural rhythm with poetry, and I enjoy it. Appreciate your comment. 🙂
Best,
Mel
Mel, I love this poem. It is melodic, flows nicely and creates a lively mood. Well done!
Thanks so much Phyllis, so pleased you could enjoy it. 🙂
Best,
Mel